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This a part of the new story i start.
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Cold, thats what he needed. Sesam needed some fresh air. ''Calm down love'' Fien said and walked out of the gate of Frostdall. Sesam snorred a bit. ''Mount me Fien, let's go for a ride'' he said. The whole island was now covered in Snow, expect for the first gens there parts. That was always a funny thing to see. But Sesam couldn't laugh about it this time. He was angry. So angry. The ground he touched turned into ice while he was moving quickly through the snow. It wasn't hard for him. ''SESAM'' said Fien loud. ''Easy boy, you need to calm down. Then we can solve this.''
Sesam didn't wanted to solve it. He was so quickly changed, he saw the world through pink glasses, living on his own cloud. He thought everything was okay, untill this midday.

'' 50 horses died, big accident.'' was the title of the magazine collum.
''Yesterday were 50 horses found dead. It was a big accident, cause there's no explaination for this. All 50 horses were 'Dalitano's'. A protected breed. Nothing was taken from those horses, not that they know of. So they don't expect murder. ''


That was the news of the day. They didn't know why those Dalitano's were killed. But he knew. For their Crystals. That was the only reason and he knew. The crystals were worth a lot of money. And you could become powerfull with those crystals. Sesam was angry, it could have been his own son!

''Sesam, we will find those people..'' said Fien softly, and stroke his neck. She was so nice for Sesam. Even if he wanted to kill her kind. But then Sesam lifted his head and looked to the sky. Snow Fell down.. and he said: ''They are here..''
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Horse Sesamantur
Rider Fien Abbygail Grigory</b>
Story Hunter and the Huntsgirl
Part 1


It's also a little trainingspicuture for Memorial Event :)
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Lunameyza's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Girl, this looks really amazing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww"/>
I will explain my ratings:
I looks wonderfull and magical, like a fairytale. The way you draw this is pretty good, the muscles are well and also the light on the horse looks good. If I look the the three behind the ice, I see the ice give a lot of light, I think you can put that light a bit more on the horse. The markings of your beautiful Sesamantur are glowing, make that glowing light also on the manes ^^. I'm a bit disappointed in the threes, they look a bit rushed out, but it does not bother me, it's actually pretty nice as a whole. I just love the manes, tale and ice <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" title="Love"/>
But all by all it looks great and I love the blue-white effect <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>